Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful. It was a joy to be able to read this on Christmas Eve :)

I posted on Y-gal as mitesoro btw, so here I am. Yes. And I loved it. it was a beautiful chapter. I love the way you two write (there're two of you, yes?). You're so rich in your imagery without describing the detail to minutely. I can picture absolutely everything you talk about in beautiful detail, but your writing never gets heavy. Your pacing is wonderful and god, your characters are so very marvelous. Thanks for writing this. I'm eagerly awaiting the next update :)